Hi, I an amateur by all standards in photography..but I have a few comments The concept of the photograpth is good. Gives a nice perception on the way expressions and heart arer seperated.
I suggest a few points that would have improved the emphasis.
First, there is too much space covered by the train rook on the outside. You have intended to focus on the words rather than the whole message you wanted to convey, so the chairs have ended up at one end, and we have a large empty space on the right.
I guess, you could have moved the words to the right and have the entire doorway of the train covered (it also improves the height in which the words are displayed). It would be very helpful in giving the chairs a persceptive look at the back. You could have used the distance between the 2 platforms to convey the message harder.
nice photos! I'm an avid photographer too, and just recovering from the loss of a gorgeous Nikon Dslr. Miss it all the time, but will soon buy another what. What camera do you use?
I've been looking at your stuff and it is great! In responce your question Yes I click all the Pics on my blog unless I say other wise every now and then i will comment on pictures I find and like. Most often I'm writing about stuff I shoot for the newspaper.
What's written on the station walls is written on walls all over the world! Not a bad sentiment!
Thanks for coming my Diary of a Studio blog and for leaving your kind comment. In fact, the studio has been finished for over a year - I'm only telling the story of building it. To see the artwork I've created in the studio, go to Landscape into Art and Studies and Sketches. For behind the scenes posts from the studio, go to My Great Day.
I'm subscribing to your feed now and look forward to more of photos and posts. Good to meet you!
Brilliant photography. I totally loved it. I got the emotions you were trying to show but what really got to me more was our urge to dirty public property for personal reasons.
Howdy! My name is Allan. According to Google I am the n’th most important Allan in the world. But really I’m just a kid born and raised in India. I’m a lill bit into photography and have clicked a few pictures too. Feel free to steer your way through my PhotoBlog; hope you'll find them interesting. If you wish to get in touch with me; try responding to any of my Blog posts.
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Hi,
I an amateur by all standards in photography..but I have a few comments
The concept of the photograpth is good. Gives a nice perception on the way expressions and heart arer seperated.
I suggest a few points that would have improved the emphasis.
First, there is too much space covered by the train rook on the outside. You have intended to focus on the words rather than the whole message you wanted to convey, so the chairs have ended up at one end, and we have a large empty space on the right.
I guess, you could have moved the words to the right and have the entire doorway of the train covered (it also improves the height in which the words are displayed). It would be very helpful in giving the chairs a persceptive look at the back. You could have used the distance between the 2 platforms to convey the message harder.
The aperture and exposure and good for the mood.
SUCH a lovely picture. Lovely capture.
Allan dude! thats good work. I agree with Balaji on the count of empty space on the right. The rest I think is amazing.
I love photography too! But I dont blog it yet. Catch you later.
Hi Allan,
nice photos! I'm an avid photographer too, and just recovering from the loss of a gorgeous Nikon Dslr. Miss it all the time, but will soon buy another what. What camera do you use?
I've been looking at your stuff and it is great! In responce your question Yes I click all the Pics on my blog unless I say other wise every now and then i will comment on pictures I find and like. Most often I'm writing about stuff I shoot for the newspaper.
Hi Allan!
What's written on the station walls is written on walls all over the world! Not a bad sentiment!
Thanks for coming my Diary of a Studio blog and for leaving your kind comment. In fact, the studio has been finished for over a year - I'm only telling the story of building it. To see the artwork I've created in the studio, go to Landscape into Art and Studies and Sketches. For behind the scenes posts from the studio, go to My Great Day.
I'm subscribing to your feed now and look forward to more of photos and posts. Good to meet you!
Great photographs! Merry Christmas, Allan.
Thanks for stopping by my site earlier today.
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checked out ur blog...
u seem to be interesting...
Brilliant photography. I totally loved it. I got the emotions you were trying to show but what really got to me more was our urge to dirty public property for personal reasons.
Oh n btw, Im going to link you if you dont mind.
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